Talk:Mississippi Highway 308/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: SounderBruce (talk · contribs) 13:37, 19 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Claiming for today. Sounder Bruce 13:37, 19 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"United States" (or an abbreviation) should be worked into the first sentence
- Fine. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- A mention of the county (and its rural nature) should appear
- Done. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"North" and "east of Dubbs" should be moved further apart; perhaps like this: "It then turned north near the community of Dubbs" and ended at MS 4 near White Oak.
- Done. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Put the gravel road before its designation (as I assume this is chronological).
- Done. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"All of the route" would sound better as "The entire route"
- Done. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"the intersection" should be "an intersection"
- Done. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"travels" should be "traveled", unless you're talking about the current road, in which case it should be spelled out ("Dubbs Road travels")
- Done. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Unincorporated community sounds more human
- Done. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"at its intersection" should be "at an intersection"
- Done. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
"as a gravel road" should be "using an existing gravel road within Tunica County connecting US 61 to MS 4"
- Done. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Who maintains the roads now?
- Added. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
References check out, but I would love something from a non-DOT/map source.
- Newspapers.com showed nothing. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

That's it. Good work. Sounder Bruce 13:50, 19 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I tried my best. Nova Chrysalia (Talk) 14:16, 19 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good to go. Passing. Sounder Bruce 14:29, 19 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]