Talk:Ohio State Route 710

Suggested fixes

1. If you use a certain parameter, one that breaks {{para}} if I try to copy it down, you can correctly write 4.06-mile-long in the first sentence of the lead. See the source of this article's lead for details. Done
2. The lead should be the place in the article where you are the most specific, yet the most concise. This is why you should use the exact establishment year, 1969, in the lead. Done
3. The prose looks a bit choppy, especially in the route description. The second sentence could easily be split in two. Done
4. You should elaborate a bit on some physical surroundings. Residential areas? Business areas? What kind of terrain? Hilly? Flat? You don't have to do this for every sentence, but details are nice every once in a while.
5. Use a shorter preposition than "along" in the junction list. Done

Have fun! TCN7JM 21:25, 8 June 2013 (UTC)

Do I add #4 in the route description?CycloneIsaac–E-Mail 23:09, 8 June 2013 (UTC)

Generally, yes. TCN7JM 00:13, 9 June 2013 (UTC)

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Ohio State Route 710/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Dough4872 (talk · contribs) 00:38, 12 June 2013 (UTC)

GA review (see here for criteria)

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1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

   • What direction does SR 710 head along Busch Boulevard?  Done
   • Overall, the route description is short and could use some more detail and reorganization. I would mention the fact of SR 710 passing through the commercial Busch area and the residential Northgate area at the point in the route description where the route passes through these areas. The route description should be written in west-to-east or south-to-north order and describing the features along the route in the order it happens.  Done
   • The history is also quite short. When were the roads that SR 710 follows first built? When were they paved?  Not done (nor ever will be) Sorry, I Googled it and there is nothing about the history of those streets.CycloneIsaac–E-Mail
   • What are the improvements that are planned for Cleveland Avenue and Schrock Road? Some additional details can be added here.  Done

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

I will put the article on hold to address concerns mainly related to the broadness of the article. Dough4872 00:46, 12 June 2013 (UTC)

I will now pass the article. Dough4872 02:44, 12 June 2013 (UTC)