Talk:One Town, One Product (Philippines)
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Major Rewrite
[edit]I have completely rewritten this article. As it was, the article was a cut-and-paste job from the both the DTI article as well as the OTOP official website. I have updated the links to OTOP and kept the link to the DTI article, though I have not kept any text from that website. PaintedCarpet (talk) 06:19, 22 August 2011 (UTC)
- Nice work! Recognizing the source material, I've made further changes to avoid typical government/business jargon. For example, I've suggested changing this:
- In keeping with DTI's thrusts and priorities, OTOP Next Gen shall also align support to DTI and PDP-identified priority industries. OTOP products shall still leverage on “Pride of Place” and cultural value while working in the backdrop of market-responsiveness.
- ...to:
- In keeping with DTI's mission and priorities, OTOP Next Gen also seeks to align support to DTI and PDP-identified priority industries. OTOP products shall still emphasize “Pride of Place” and cultural value, while focusing on marketability.
- Re this passage, though:
- It enables localities and communities to determine, develop, support and promote culturally-rooted products or services where they can be the best at or best renowned for.
- What does the part beginning with "where they can be the best..." actually mean? I'd suggest an edit, but I'm baffled. – AndyFielding (talk) 10:15, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
- Nice work! Recognizing the source material, I've made further changes to avoid typical government/business jargon. For example, I've suggested changing this:
Examples of OTOP Products
[edit]I realize this is a bit of an arbirtary list. I have attempted to give a representative list of products backed up by reliable sources. If anyone else has references and examples to add to this list, I encourage them to do so. PaintedCarpet (talk) 06:21, 22 August 2011 (UTC)
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