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The text reads more like an advertisment than an encyclopedic article. - Quirk 12:29, 30 December 2005 (UTC)[reply]

They are currently on tour... ????--217.247.7.234 09:49, 27 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

This text should be removed and re-written. Origin deserves an high quality objective article. 09/03/06 (Yann)

This text was copy+pasted from what looks like the band official website, if not Relapse Records' website. This should be re-written more objectively. The capitalisation of the band names is a dead give away that this was copy+pasted. --Nargos 02:54, 22 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I've made an attempt to wikify the article and make it more neutral. It'll probably still need some work, but it's less of an advertisment now. Raven_1959 13:05, 28 March 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I tried to neutralize a little bit of it, but it's way too slanted to simply be modified. Also, I'm not as familiar with the band as some, so I had to interpret what was alreay there. Hopefully someone more dedicated to them will try to give it a much needed overhaul.

Reworking

I'll try to rework this page sometime. I've just added in pages for all 3 albums, trying to put in a little more than just bare bones info Dace59 16:08, 11 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I added the info box on the side DemonOfTheFall27 23:18, 10 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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Best band ever!!! —Preceding unsigned comment added by 4.22.141.200 (talk) 09:02, 10 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Looking forward for new album! Anyone heard of a title yet? Or release date?4.22.141.200 (talk) 09:18, 10 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

LONGSTRETH

I can't believe John Longstreth doesn't have his own page.

Broken link

The link to the supposed homepage of the band is misleading. --89.245.127.218 (talk) 16:55, 17 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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Sources

Interviews

Interview with Paul Ryan (MetalSucks – May 23, 2008)
Interview with Jeremy Turner and Paul Ryan (Archaic-Magazine.com – May 14, 2008)
Interview with Paul Ryan (Global Domination – October 19, 2007)
Interview with Paul Ryan (Teeth of the Divine – July 12, 2005)
Interview with Paul Ryan (MetalReview.com – December 23, 2002)

Canniba loki 20:33, 23 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Articles

"Decimating the Masses" (Resound Magazine, by John Sheldon ~2005)
"Inhuman" (Resound Magazine, by Wade Gosselin ~2002)

Canniba loki 22:09, 23 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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