Talk:Paper Dove/GA1
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 04:35, 28 May 2012 (UTC)
- Plot: "describing his as cowardly" I think 'his' should be 'him'
- Plot: Maybe a add a note that one of the characters is the Polaroid Man. I assume he's the "strange man hiding his face behind dark glasses"? Or am I way off base
- Production: I think the sentence about Wright should be divided up into two smaller sentences: "Wright had previously directed four episodes of the first season—"Dead Letters", "The Wild and the Innocent", "The Thin White Line" and "Powers, Principalities, Thrones and Dominions" and would go on to direct a further twenty-one episodes over the series' run. Wright would also direct "Millennium", the series' crossover episode with its sister show The X-Files."
Those are the only issues. On hold for seven days.--Gen. Quon (talk) 15:28, 29 May 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for looking at this one. I've made the changes you suggested. I'll try to get some reviews done for you within the next few days in return; I owe you a good few by now. GRAPPLE X 21:47, 29 May 2012 (UTC)
- Excellent. Passing.--Gen. Quon (talk) 23:23, 29 May 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for looking at this one. I've made the changes you suggested. I'll try to get some reviews done for you within the next few days in return; I owe you a good few by now. GRAPPLE X 21:47, 29 May 2012 (UTC)