Talk:Pee-wee's Big Adventure/GA1
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Article was listed as a Good article on May 25, 2008.
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[edit]- The lead section should be longer than four sentences.
- The plot is at 819 words. Should be between 400-700 per WP:PLOT.
- Cast list shouldn't have boldface per WP:MOSBOLD.
- Fails "Factually accurate and verifiable". The "Cast" section is unsourced and has oringal research.
- Most sources are primary sources from the DVD audio track and some from IMDb and Amazon.
- The release and reception doesn't cover what it could/should. More reviews could be added, more information about its box office performance. More material from the book Burton on Burton could probably be added. There's many more sources that could be looked at. [1]
At this time I don't feel that it meets the GA criteria|GA criteria. —Mike Allen 21:38, 27 February 2010 (UTC)