Talk:Pikachu/to do
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"Pikachu is most famous for being the "face" of the Pokémon franchise, perhaps being the most widely recognised around the world. " - needs referencedoes not have enough footnoting, and could use with a few more references.needs to have its grammar and spelling checked and corrected.The cultural impact is in stub form.WP:LEAD is pretty poorlots of Weasel words (eg "probably, the most popular") a fair dose of repeating itself,some needless references to the editor's other favourite Nintendo games.The cultural impact section is still a bulleted list.The biology section is written from an in-universe perspectiveThe "in the anime" section is headed up with a decorative image (can we replace it with a screenshot of Pikachu and Ash?)Game names aren't always in italics.In the anime section, paragraphs often start off talking about one thing and end talking about another.There could be better linking- like in Biology, various electrical concepts aren't linked like they could be.Some of the wordings bother me: "Pikachu is the only Pokémon in Ash's huge party that has been with him in every series, although a Phanpy he rose from an egg joined him after he travelled around Hoenn."- "
Many of the Pokémon animated shorts with all-Pokémon dialogue have featured Pikachu as the main character, often as the main voice of reason. " some concepts are casually thrown in without explanation or linking (like a "Phanpy").the order of the sections feel haphazard and mixed together. (Why is anime Pikachu's diet in that section? Why does a description of in-game pikachus separate the anime and manga sections? etc.)
- All tasks completed —M inun (Spiderman) 15:26, 17 July 2006 (UTC)