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Reviewer: Aoba47 (talk · contribs) 12:43, 17 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]


Lead and infobox
  • Please add ALT text for the infobox image.
  • I am not sure if the reference for the lead is necessary. References in the lead are usually reserved for controversial information, and I think that the part aobut the unreleased song should also be located and cited in the body of the article.
Background
  • Wikilink “Lorde” when you first mention her in the body of the article.
  • Remember to include ALT text for all of the images in the body of the article.
  • For this part (In an interview with Fuse), would it be possible to add a wikilink for “Fuse”? Is this a reference to Fuse (TV channel)?
Development
  • Everything looks good here.
Concert synopsis
  • For this part (The show was divided mainly into three parts.), I am uncertain if “mainly” is needed.
  • This part (The set included three screens of video that showed Lorde and her band.) needs a citation. The same comment applies to this part (She also cites her fear of aging as inspiration.).
  • For this part (was set in blue colors), maybe “shades of blue” would be better than “blue colors”.
Reception
  • Great work with this section.
Final comments
@Aoba47: Went ahead and fixed the article. Thank you so much for reviewing this! You should try to do some tour articles. I initially thought they would be a nightmare to do but they proved to be quite easy. De88 (talk) 21:32, 17 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]