Talk:Randy Ambrosie/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 10:04, 12 November 2017 (UTC)
It's me again! Taking on this review. MWright96 (talk) 15:22, 12 November 2017 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Infobox
[edit]- Multiple facts in the infobox are unsourced, like the DOB, POB, height, and weight
- I think these come from the The Canadian Pro Football Encyclopedia, @BU Rob13: WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 21:44, 16 November 2017 (UTC)
- Yes, the entire infobox in all of my Canadian football biographies are sourced to the CPFE. ~ Rob13Talk 22:06, 16 November 2017 (UTC)
- I think these come from the The Canadian Pro Football Encyclopedia, @BU Rob13: WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 21:44, 16 November 2017 (UTC)
Early career
[edit]- "In 1984, he was named an All-Canadian." - maybe you could explain what an All-Canadian is to non-football experts like myself
Done
- "By February 1985, he was considered likely to be selected in the first round of the 1985 CFL Draft." - if there anything to say whom Ambrosie was likely to be selected for the first round of the 85 draft?
Done
Calgary Stampeders
[edit]- Wikilink Calgary Stampeders since it is the first time it is mentioned in the main body of the prose
Done
- I'm guessing that rookie of the year is the CFL's Most Outstanding Rookie Award? If so please added a wikilink
Done
Toronto Argonauts
[edit]- Added a wikilink to Toronto Argonauts and right guard
Done
- "The continued injury issues didn't affect the offensive line's success on the field," - no contractions please
Done
Edmonton Eskimos
[edit]- "The Argonauts had not originally planned to trade Ambrosie, but Ambrosie requested to be traded to a team closer to where his wife worked." - reptition of Ambrosie
Done
- "The Eskimos met the Stampeders in the West Final for the fourth season in the row" - reword to The Eskimos met the Stapeders in the West Final for the fourth consecutive season
Done
Adminstrative roles
[edit]- "On June 29, 2017, Ambrosie was named to be the 14th CFL commissioner, succeeding Jeffrey Orridge." - should be reworded toOn June 29, 2017 Ambrosie was name the 14th CFL commissioner, succeeding Jeffrey Orridge.
Done
- "The move was made official on July 4." - perhaphs this could be reworded to say The move was made offical five days later.
Done
- I slightly changed this section of the article. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 23:10, 16 November 2017 (UTC)
- The change looks fine and thanks for correcting a factual error that I overlooked. MWright96 (talk) 11:14, 17 November 2017 (UTC)
- I slightly changed this section of the article. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 23:10, 16 November 2017 (UTC)
References
[edit]- References 39, 40 and 46 are bare urls
Done
Going to place this review on hold until everything has been dealt with. MWright96 (talk) 15:22, 12 November 2017 (UTC)
- I'm helping Rob with his reviews, so I'll get to this if he doesn't. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 10:43, 16 November 2017 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: Thank you for taking on the review for Rob. Am more than happy to make this article a GA. MWright96 (talk) 11:14, 17 November 2017 (UTC)