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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:48, 22 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]


I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:48, 22 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

  • No hyphen in The Regioni-class was a group
    • Good catch.
  • Images appropriately licensed.
  • Link naval architect
    • Added
  • Strongly suggest saving the specifics of each ship for their own articles and give only the range of lengths/speeds, etc. here. Otherwise you're likely to get eyes glazing over.
    • Yeah, I had thought of that.
  • Puglia had a deck that was only 25 mm (0.98 in) thick, though she had the same thickness Why "though" as it's also half the thickness of her sisters?
    • No, it's the same as her sisters - 50mm
  • Don't really think that the bulk of the land action in the Russo-Japanese War took place in Korea.
    • Indeed, meant Manchuria
      • I think that you accidentally reversed these. The ship was in Korea while the fighting was in Manchuria.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:45, 23 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]
        • Whoops, that'll teach me to try to fix things when I'm wiped out after a long day at work...
  • Don't forget the ampersand for the refs to match your notes.
    • Oops, added now.
  • Why are you using years for refs that cannot be confused for other refs?
    • Sloppy copy-pasting from articles that had multiple editions of those refs :P
  • Is there a year for the Public Health Reports?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:59, 22 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]