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Reviewer: Parsecboy (talk · contribs) 20:34, 23 November 2011 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (MoS):
- The line about her commissioning and trials should be reversed, i.e., "the ship was commissioned in March 1911 but did not complete sea trials until..."
- Let me double-check McLaughlin, but I think that it is correct as written.
- Oh, I wasn't saying it was wrong, I was commenting on the chronological order - it sounds odd to say "in November I did xxxxxx but last July I did xxxxxxx." The sentence would flow better if you put it in chronological order. Parsecboy (talk) 02:39, 28 November 2011 (UTC)
- OK, rewritten.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:31, 30 November 2011 (UTC)
- Oh, I wasn't saying it was wrong, I was commenting on the chronological order - it sounds odd to say "in November I did xxxxxx but last July I did xxxxxxx." The sentence would flow better if you put it in chronological order. Parsecboy (talk) 02:39, 28 November 2011 (UTC)
- Let me double-check McLaughlin, but I think that it is correct as written.
- The line about her commissioning and trials should be reversed, i.e., "the ship was commissioned in March 1911 but did not complete sea trials until..."
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
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- Halpern has a bit on page 190 that should be incorporated
- Lemme check when I get home.
- Have you had a look at this yet? Parsecboy (talk) 02:04, 6 December 2011 (UTC)
- Lemme check when I get home.
- Since McLaughlin is the only source cited, the others should be moved to a "further reading" section.
- Done.
- Halpern has a bit on page 190 that should be incorporated
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- The article is in pretty good shape, just a few things that need fixing. Parsecboy (talk) 20:34, 23 November 2011 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail:
Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:20, 28 November 2011 (UTC)
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