Talk:SMS König Wilhelm/GA1

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Reviewer: FAC Wiki cop ter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 02:48, 18 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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More info on precisely why the Wilhelm was the largest ship in the German Navy in the body and lede. FAC Wiki cop ter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 02:48, 18 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Added a line to the body - I don't know that more detail would be suitable for the lead. Parsecboy (talk) 08:56, 18 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  - And why she was the most powerful.
    - Does that really need to be spelled out? Shouldn't that be an obvious conclusion for a reader to make? Parsecboy (talk) 22:56, 20 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
      - Perhaps compare her to the other ships of her age. FAC Wiki cop ter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 00:39, 21 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
        I added a note comparing the ship to the preceding two ships and succeeding two classes. Parsecboy (talk) 00:55, 21 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Gravesend is a dab in the infobox. FAC Wiki cop ter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 02:48, 20 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Fixed. Parsecboy (talk) 22:56, 20 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Really sorry I didn't get to this earlier. I was on wikibreak. Comments to come in a few minutes: FAC Wiki cop ter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 20:51, 3 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I don't see almost anything about WWI service, except a change of support ship.
- Beyond that, there isn't anything else. Fix that, and I'll pass. FAC Wiki cop ter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 20:57, 3 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  - That's cause she didn't do anything else during WWI - she was 50 years old by then ;) Parsecboy (talk) 22:44, 3 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Haha. Passed. FAC Wiki cop ter _{what i do} s + c cup|former 03:05, 7 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]