Talk:Sandlot ball
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Instructor feedback 4.23.2020
[edit]Your structure here is looking good; I like the idea of having a "history" and "function" section, and you've done a nice job including an infobox.
I have a few concerns about the "Throughout the Years" section: I'm not sure what is different about "throughout the years" from "history"; you have a lot of vague and unsourced statements, which I've noted with flags in the text.
Some questions I'm left with:
- What are some of the variations in rules? Surely people have written down/recorded some of their rules. A section on some of those varieties would be great.
- What's the cultural impact of sandlot ball? There are a few academic articles that address this question, plus this book on sandlot culture (https://books.google.com/books?id=lQCUxy2okyYC&printsec=frontcover&source=gbs_ge_summary_r&cad=0#v=onepage&q&f=false). I think this article could benefit from another academic source or two.
Elizabeth.f.chamberlain (talk) 19:55, 23 April 2020 (UTC)
Peer Review
[edit]I added my peer review of this article. I hope it helps. Great job, keep up the good work!
Haley McDaniel (talk) 02:41, 23 March 2020 (UTC)
I got something from Wikipedia
[edit]Wikipedia said this doesn’t match the tone of that articles usually have. Can someone edit this? Theobegley2013 (talk) 12:02, 28 July 2023 (UTC)
SAND LOT
[edit]@BilCat:Need to explain origins of phrase. ..... 0mtwb9gd5wx (talk) 02:12, 16 October 2023 (UTC)
- BAD REVERTS IGNORE DISCUSSION ....0mtwb9gd5wx (talk) 02:51, 16 October 2023 (UTC)
- What does that even mean? - wolf 03:16, 16 October 2023 (UTC)