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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 01:10, 14 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Created by Thriley (talk) and Silver seren (talk). Nominated by Silver seren (talk) at 20:57, 10 December 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Sandra Elkin; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: The phrasing in the hook makes it sound like women were radicalized into supporting issues, as opposed to acting against them. A more appropriate phrasing might be this:

I've gone ahead and just removed the last word in the main hook, since it's not really a suggestion for an entirely alternative hook, but just that one word. And I agree with your reasoning on removing it, CJ-Moki. Does that work? SilverserenC 00:49, 12 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Silver seren: Yes, that works. CJ-Moki (talk) 00:56, 12 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Silver seren and CJ-Moki: there are four occasions of women's/Woman/women in a seventeen word sentence. Any way we could decrease the repetition a little? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 21:04, 10 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Silver seren and AirshipJungleman29: I think this might work:
  • ALT2: ... that Sandra Elkin discussing basic information on women's topics on Woman "radicalized" viewers into supporting feminism?
CJ-Moki (talk) 21:13, 10 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
If you'd like, CJ-Moki. I kinda did the repetition of woman and women on purpose because I thought it made the hook more fun and interesting. SilverserenC 23:05, 10 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Silver seren and AirshipJungleman29: I actually agree and prefer ALT1 over ALT2. CJ-Moki (talk) 23:55, 10 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, I'll promote ALT1 but I can't guarantee it won't be changed. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 00:03, 11 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]