Talk:Shadow Hearts: Covenant/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Abryn (talk · contribs) 16:07, 27 August 2019 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

"Another key location is the Graveyard, a realm within protagonist Yuri Hyuga's soul." - Feels a bit repetitive to have the Graveyard explained twice.
Fixed some issues I found, please review the changes when you get the chance.
I noted a bit of repetition with the word "called" being used for multiple sentences in a row. Can you fix that up?

That said, the couple of notes I have aren't enough to halt it passing, just make sure to take them into consideration. Good job. - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 18:47, 4 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]