Jump to content

Talk:Shipping during the Panic of 1893

Page contents not supported in other languages.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Unttiled 2018 comments

[edit]

An interesting topic but the draft needs a lot more attention. How about explaining what the panic was? How many people were impacted by the panic? What do we know about what caused it? What stopped it? What factors explain its severity? There should be a lot more citations on this. Cassell04 (talk) 17:14, 14 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

You have good references but there is little to no detail in what you contributed. You could expand a lot further into the subject in order to make your additions more substantive. Diving deeper into your citations could provide more information and material to accomplish this. Dominick BattistoneDbattis3 (talk) 01:38, 16 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review: Nia P.

[edit]

Good start on the article however it is very brief and not that informative. You seem to have good sources and will be able to add more information to give more insight on the topic of the railroads, you just have not done so yet. Good sources, and good topic, I also like the structure of the article thus far. Add more information, other than that you seem to be on the right track. Great job. NiaSavon (talk) 21:27, 20 October 2018 (UTC)NiaSavon[reply]