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GA Review

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Reviewer: Basilisk4u (talk · contribs) 19:12, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! I will review this album. Basilisk4u (talk) 19:12, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Notes

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Lead
  • When talking about how the group moved the recording to Trinidad, it might be good to add a short "Hoping that a change of scenery would benefit the recording process, the group moved the recording sessions..."
  • "It also expands on..." say "The record" instead of "It" just to be more clear
  • I am a bit confused by the use of the word "classicist" here, please clarify
Background
  • Looks good!
Recording
  • "the drum machine" --> "a drum machine"? Or is it a specific drum machine?
  • Briefly explain how the dynamic microphone affects sound
  • I think that the source also says that the group was tired of the California lifestyle, possibly add that in as well

Honestly, after reading through the whole article, it was very hard to find anything that could be improved upon. Great work! I am putting the review on hold in order for these small issues to be addressed. Take care! Basilisk4u (talk) 19:39, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

 Noted in the lead, "the album" rather than "it", "a drum machine", noted mic's purpose per source, noted lifestyle, replaced "classicist" w/better adjectives. Dan56 (talk) 22:32, 20 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Awesome! Passed the article. Basilisk4u (talk) 00:03, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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