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Neutrality question

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I'd like to understand and address the neutrality dispute added to this page. What is the problem and how do we fix it? - Nleighanderson

Hi, Nleighanderson. First, please remember to sign your posts using four tildes. (Like this: ~~~~) Second, the neutrality issue is because the article contains words I identified as puffery; it makes it seem a bit like promotion, but fixable enough not to warrant speedy deletion. Here's an example: "The SISCAPA workflow adds a unique enrichment step to the isotope dilution method" contains the word "unique," which, while it may be true, has a hint of puffery. However, the bigger problem is the article's use of overly technical terms which can confuse the average reader (including me!). Example: what does "patented immunoaffinity enrichment sample preparation workflow" mean? This article is fine to be on Wikipedia, but if you could assist me in cleaning up the problems as I listed above, that would be wonderful! Please refer to Wikipedia:Make technical articles understandable for help with making it more understandable, and to Wikipedia:Neutral point of view on how to present the article in a more neutral way. I hope this helped, and feel free to ask me any more questions you might have! MereTechnicality 13:03, 13 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]