Talk:Sulphide portrait glassware

Sulphide portrait glassware is currently an Art and architecture good article nominee. Nominated by TwoScars (talk) at 19:42, 27 August 2024 (UTC)

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Short description: Special type of glassware

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GA Review

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Nominator: TwoScars (talk · contribs) 19:42, 27 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Rollinginhisgrave (talk · contribs) 19:02, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this in the next day. Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 19:02, 15 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Content and prose

Link: silver sulphide,
Gloss: Josiah Wedgwood, Apsley Pellatt, Benjamin Bakewell
~~In the United States~~, Pittsburgh
current (early 1800s) politicians then current
final quarter of the late, less verbose
They also were set in plaques of glass they also were sometimes / they could also be
to sides or bottoms add article
viewing through the glass past tense
baked to a hardness could you explain what this means?
Bakewell was very familiar with French and English fashions and styles. integrate this better, significance is confusing here
other partners different word than other
glass making company I think this needs to be hyphenated as it's functioning as an adjective
and it reorganized again under the name Bakewell, Page and Bakewell after September 1813 or during?
About $45,000 clarify "that year"
At times he would present gifts of glassware I'm guessing to public figures? Or just in general?
Benjamin Bakewell moved to New York ....glassware for the White House. this is a lot of detail without mentioning sulphide glassware once. Needs to be cut way down to contextualize information relevant to sulphide glassware, or integrate discussion of article subject better.
There is a brief mention that it was still being produced in Europe, but more attention is paid to the fact it wasn't being produced by one company in the United States. Needs a lot more discussion of European production to be balanced.

Suggestions

Might be bold, but I would cut Barthélemy Desprez. The name adds nothing, and he doesn't appear to be notable. If he is, I would suggest redlinking him.
Later in the year → that year
American Revolutionary War hero false title

Other

Neutral Y
Broad / summary style N Issues raised above; very focused on the US, and includes a lot of extra info on company without discussing sulphide portrait glassware for a while.
No COPYVIO / OR Y; 11.5% earwig, name of source.
Stable Y
Illustrated YYY beautifully, all subjects in public domain, no issues there

Sources

[4] Y
[8] Y
[12] AGF, can't access
[17] {y}}
[20] Could you get me a quote from this supporting this text?

Rollinginhisgrave (talk) 06:23, 16 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]