Talk:Terror of the Zygons/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: OlifanofmrTennant (talk · contribs) 16:52, 6 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: DoctorWhoFan91 (talk · contribs) 09:44, 17 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take this one, the article seems very well written. I'll add remarks in an half an hour's time. DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 09:44, 17 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

which was the first broadcast in four weekly parts→which was first broadcast in four weekly parts Done
... and Harry Sullivan. It features the final regular appearances by Nicholas Courtney (as Brigadier Lethbridge-Stewart) and by Marter.→and Harry Sullivan, with the episode featuring Marter's and Nicholas Courtney's (as Brigadier Lethbridge-Stewart) final regular appearances. or any phrasing which lists Marter first Done

Expand all three sub-sections, see Genesis of the Daleks#Production(GotD), not necessarily as long, but still need some expansion

Write the viewer numbers and add AI values in a new paragraph(see GotD).
Para 3: the amount of parentheses look weird, consider removing the years, as they are not necessary

Ref 3: Is Banks a typo of Barns, or is it not linked? Done
Ref 20: The SFX ref redirects, add usurped to status, so that it links only to the archived version Done
Ref 21: A.V. Club ref is dead Done
Ref 27: Babelcolor does not seem reliable, find another ref
Per MOS: CONSISTENT, add wikilinks to all or none of the refs

@OlifanofmrTennant: Article looks good, needs expansion in one section, and some minor changes. I'll do source spot-checking in my second read-through. It looks well on the way to GA. Good luck! DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 10:15, 17 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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