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GA Review

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Reviewer: Ruby2010 comment! 15:44, 27 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Comments

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  • Indicate 6.9 million viewers watched the episode in the lead (some might not understand the Nielsen rating)
  • Wikilink Milhouse and Martin
  • Why does Homer's hatred of Bart cause him to fail miserably? It's been a while since I saw this episode
  • Abe -> Grampa (change?)
  • Last three sentences in cultural ref section need citations
  • Make sure sentences with quotes end with citations
  • Wikilink ref publishers (Pioneer Press etc)

Just make the above fixes and the article will be good to go!

Thanks for the review! Queenieacoustic (talk) 17:37, 27 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Looks great. Pass for GA Ruby2010 comment! 18:28, 27 June 2011 (UTC)[reply]