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Reviewer: SL93 (talk · contribs) 22:48, 17 August 2019 (UTC)
- "Trang died in a car accident at age 27" and "She was 27 years old" - There should be something stating that she is part of the 27 Club instead of just linking to it twice in an odd way.
- "Trang's first acting experience was appearing in a television commercial for the Church of Scientology commercial, even though she herself was a Buddhist." - Can a bit be added about what Trang did in the commercial?
- Unfortunately I've not been able to find any sources that say that... — Hunter Kahn 03:26, 18 August 2019 (UTC)
- That's fine and there is nothing really to do about if no one writes about it. SL93 (talk) 03:40, 18 August 2019 (UTC)
- Unfortunately I've not been able to find any sources that say that... — Hunter Kahn 03:26, 18 August 2019 (UTC)
- "Trang repeatedly got hurt on the set of the show, and often had to be physically carried by others during shooting because of injuries." Can a bit more be added about her injuries? For example, while reading the article Trini Kwan, I saw that it mentioned Trang breaking her leg during season 2 while performing a stunt. It could be false information though because it isn't referenced.
- I saw that reference on the Trini Kwan article as well as other unofficial websites, but I haven't found any reliable sources that address it, unfortunately, so I've not been able to include those specifics. If you know of any I can certainly add it...
- That's fine. It would have just been an interesting thing to add. SL93 (talk) 03:40, 18 August 2019 (UTC)
- I saw that reference on the Trini Kwan article as well as other unofficial websites, but I haven't found any reliable sources that address it, unfortunately, so I've not been able to include those specifics. If you know of any I can certainly add it...
- "Trang's character's departure was explained in the two-part episode "The Power Transfer", in which the powers of the Red, Black, and Yellow Rangers are transferred to new characters using the Sword of Light." It isn't explained in the article what the Sword of Light is.
- I added a little bit of context referring to it as an "ancient magical artifact". — Hunter Kahn 03:26, 18 August 2019 (UTC)
- "She made a guest appearance at the Little Saigon Tet Festival in Westminster, California, on February 4, 1995, during which she spoke about her time on Power Rangers, other aspects of her career, and her experiences trying to break into film and television as an Asian-American actress." The Little Saigon Tet Festival doesn't have an article so it is probably best to add at least a little bit of clarification of what the festival is.
- Added a description calling it "an event honoring Vietnamese culture". — Hunter Kahn 03:26, 18 August 2019 (UTC)
- The Filmography section needs to be referenced.
- Added references. — Hunter Kahn 03:26, 18 August 2019 (UTC)
These are minor issues and I believe that they can be addressed easily. SL93 (talk) 22:48, 17 August 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! — Hunter Kahn 03:26, 18 August 2019 (UTC)
I am passing this per the Good Article criteria. SL93 (talk) 03:46, 18 August 2019 (UTC)