Talk:Tim Kaine/GA1
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Reviewer: SNUGGUMS (talk · contribs) 14:48, 4 August 2016 (UTC)
Auto-fail: article is not stable and obviously not going to be for a politician running for office as details are highly subject to change as the election gets closer. Please wait at least until the 2016 election has passed before renominating. On another note, there are far too many sections, subsections, and paragraphs that are ridiculously short (some of which are only one or two sentences/lines) and should be expanded or merged with other text for better flow. See WP:Manual of Style/Layout#Paragraphs for more. The sentence "Kaine was sworn in for a six-year term on January 3, 2013, reuniting him with Mark Warner, the senior senator. Kaine was lieutenant governor when Warner was governor of Virginia" also is missing a citation. Snuggums (talk / edits) 14:48, 4 August 2016 (UTC)