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Structure

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Article is written in 1st person and asking questions. Sounds like a discussion between friends. Needs to be rewritten with citation of sources (footnotes or related links) and there needs to be subtopics with headings. Panda

NPOV

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Wikipedia rules state all articles and other encyclopedic content must be written from a neutral point of view (NPOV), representing fairly and without bias all significant views. This article is clearly biased and not neutral. It should be rewritten. Afrolocks 00:50, 19 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Present status

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The comments above were vaild - but the article has been sub edited to a far better Wiki standard as of February 2009. However, more references / input would be welcomed.

Derek R Bullamore (talk) 22:54, 6 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]