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Good articleTouch Me Like That has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
April 17, 2008Good article nomineeListed

Australian release date?

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I removed it from the article until it can be sourced. I can't find any official comments on when it will be released in Australia. -- Underneath-it-All 19:02, 30 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Looks pretty good! Here are a few suggestions:

  • Do we know the full names of "S. James and J. Wirrick"? Also, both of these people aren't mention anywhere else in the article.
  • The lead needs to be expanded a bit to summarize all the major sections.
  • UK should be spelled out the first time mentioned.
  • The "Personnel" section should use a medium dash (–) not the small dash.
  • The track listings should have track times.
  • "close friend of Minogue" I think it should be "Minogue's".
  • "compared recording "Touch Me Like That" to "best chocolate cake you ever ate" " is missing a "the". Even though it's a quote, it should still make sense grammatically.

And that's it! I've put the article on hold, which gives you 7 days. Let me know when you think you've addressed my concerns. Drewcifer (talk) 23:44, 16 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I think I've fixed everything. James and Wirrick are the writers of "You Make Me Feel (Mighty Real)" and are credited because of the sampling. I added that James originally performed the song and co-wrote it. -- Underneath-it-All (talk) 02:26, 17 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Few things still unaddressed: Wirrick isn't mentioned anywhere but in the lead (which shouldn't introduce info not in the article somewhere else). Also, the lead does not mention the music video. Drewcifer (talk) 04:18, 17 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Expanded the lead to include info on the music video and Wirrick is now mentioned in the "background and reception" section. -- Underneath-it-All (talk) 17:21, 17 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Cool, looks good! Drewcifer (talk) 20:30, 17 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]