Talk:Tsugaru clan

Tsugaru clan was one of the History good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.

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Date	Process	Result
July 17, 2008	Peer review	Reviewed
August 15, 2008	Good article nominee	Listed
August 20, 2024	Good article reassessment	Delisted

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I'd have a single Nihongo (or, if appropriate, Nihongo3) template for the article (or perhaps each section), using Nihongo2 for the rest. No point in multiplying links to Help:Japanese.

This really isn't my area, I'm afraid; and this (plus the usual laziness etc.) deters me from fiddling with it further and perhaps screwing it up. I'll just say that I think sudden unexplained mentions of "clans", "domains", and "daimyo" (sic) could be more inviting -- I've linked to an explanation of the first of these. (Interesting that searching via clan leads you to articles on specific clans of something called "Naruto" before it leads you to any article on real clans. It's also a bit disturbing that the article on daimyo [sic] treats readers to an explanation of what the Japanese word (?) "myo" [sic] means.)

Good luck with the article. -- Hoary (talk) 06:06, 19 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

GA concerns

After reviewing the article, I am concerned that it no longer meets the GA criteria, particularily because much of the article is uncited. Is anyone interested in addressing this concern, or should it go to WP:GAR? Z1720 (talk) 22:30, 28 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA Reassessment

Tsugaru clan

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Result: Delisted. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 00:43, 20 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Much of this article is uncited, and the lede is too short to summarise all major aspects of the article. Z1720 (talk) 01:11, 5 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Delist per nom comments. The unsourced information is too much. Also some issues with MOS:OVERLINK. seefooddiet (talk) 18:23, 5 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

seefooddiet, your !vote has no meaning. You're supposed to give the reassessment time to give traction. 750 h+ 09:58, 9 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

- This article definitely needs some love and an update, but overlinking is a trivial and easily fixed complaint. I found a mere two instances of it being broken and simply fixed them (hatamoto is still linked twice, but it's relevant in both places and in greatly spaced sections, so allowed by the OL rules). SnowFire (talk) 16:21, 10 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  It may be good to list up most uncited areas. Cutting down on unsupportable claims and sticking references from jawiki, along with finding sources in Japanese may work? ABG (Talk/Report any mistakes here) 12:44, 12 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.