Talk:Tumbinai Khan
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Too long article lead in?
[edit]The start of the article should be there so that people can quickly learn about him and what he did quickly. It is a de facto summary. I don't think it needs information about all his notable descendants (although def. Temüjin) and about his entire life. These lead in is longer than many entire stub articles. A notable descendants section could also fix the need to have all of this at the top. JacobTheRox (talk) 12:28, 18 June 2023 (UTC)