Talk:USS Guam (CB-2)/GA1
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 19:52, 13 December 2011 (UTC)
I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:52, 13 December 2011 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- Too many "Guams" in close conjunction in lede, reword. Link knots on first occurrence (the lede). Hyphenate class name in lede. Fix this: at the New York Shipbuilding in Camden,. Missing a word: departed for a raid the mainland Japanese islands
- Should all be addressed.
- Too many "Guams" in close conjunction in lede, reword. Link knots on first occurrence (the lede). Hyphenate class name in lede. Fix this: at the New York Shipbuilding in Camden,. Missing a word: departed for a raid the mainland Japanese islands
- B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- Add name, builder, ordered date, identification (hull number), class to infobox. Link scrapped, 40 mm Bofors, 20 mm Oerlikon and Bayonne, NJ.
- All added.
- Add name, builder, ordered date, identification (hull number), class to infobox. Link scrapped, 40 mm Bofors, 20 mm Oerlikon and Bayonne, NJ.
- B. Focused:
- What kind of radars/ECM did she have? How did she launch her aircraft and what kind did she have? Were any plans made to convert her to a missile ship postwar? What kind of turbines, direct-drive or geared? What do L/50 and L/38 mean?
- Added gun directors, I can't find anything on search radars/ECM. Aircraft info, turbines, note on L/50 added. As far as I can tell, there were no plans to convert the ship post-war.
- What kind of radars/ECM did she have? How did she launch her aircraft and what kind did she have? Were any plans made to convert her to a missile ship postwar? What kind of turbines, direct-drive or geared? What do L/50 and L/38 mean?
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
