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Good articleUSS West Apaum has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
September 4, 2008Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:USS West Apaum (ID-3221)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Having reviewed this article, I have elected to place it On Hold, to allow a few minor issues to be fixed, mostly to do with footnote format.

  • Several footnotes lack retrieval dates (notably refs 2 & 4)
    • Note 2 is an offline reference and, I believe doesn't need a retrieval date.
    • Note 4 is a short version of the third item in the "Bibliography" section (which has a retrieval date there). If you think it needs the retreival date for the short form, I'll be happy to place it there also or instead. — Bellhalla (talk) 06:12, 4 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
  • Footnote 8 is somewhat confusing, as I don't see Shipping Board Operations listed in the "references" section.

Another excellent mercantile marine article, all the best in taking it forward, you can contact me on my talk-page if you have questions. Cam (Chat) 05:20, 4 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]

My replies are interspersed above. — Bellhalla (talk) 06:12, 4 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]