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Page reads like an ad
[edit]With words like 'innovative' and 'stylish', this page reads like an ad. I'm not experienced in editing Wikipedia, so I'm not sure what to do about it. Thomasberends (talk) 17:46, 26 May 2023 (UTC)
- I just added the warning for "reads like an ad". Maybe a good first step would be to remove the buzzwords? Hamsterdamn (talk) 09:27, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
- I am also a beginner, but in light of Wikipedia's Be Bold editing guideline I have opted to begin the buzzword cleanup process.
- For anyone interested in continuing this work, I would add that I believe I was in fact not very bold in my editing itself as I did not have much time in that moment, I can in fact see that I missed a buzzword near the end of the article. I see some entire sentences that could be rewritten, but with motivation to "get the ball rolling" I kept my editing to buzzword removal and grammar/vocabulary improvement.
- I will gladly edit more boldly at another moment, with more time. 68.70.145.248 (talk) 17:32, 1 December 2023 (UTC)
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