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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Waldis Joaquín/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 07:23, 17 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • "appeared in a career-high 10 games. " you mean career-high for that one season?
  • "Claimed off waivers by ... the waiver claim" repetitive (and to me, a non-expert, completely indecipherable).
  • "the Washington Nationals organization" does "organization" add anything to this?
  • Similar in the following sentence.
  • "the disabled list" is that the injury list? Is there a link?
  • "became a free agent. He" overlinked.
  • extended spring training is linked but spring training is not?
  • " a 1-0 record" en-dash.
  • "Caribes de Anzoategui " missing a diacritic.
  • "2017-18 offseason" en-dash.
  • "Bleacher Report" link.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 14:58, 17 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]