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GA Review

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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 19:09, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Initial review

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Lead / Infobox
  • I decided to just make the changes here myself. There wasn't many.
Background
  • No comma needed before album title.
  • These producers included Stargate, RedOne and personnel from Jay-Z's label, Roc Nation, which they had signed to in April 2009 --> These producers included Stargate, RedOne and personnel from Jay-Z's record label Roc Nation, which they signed a record deal with in April 2009.
  • under their real names --> Not needed.
    • Fixed. I don't know why I put that there lol. Till
  • How about some more background information? Surely there should be information about Keisha being kicked out of the group. The song was originally recorded with her, and the new one re-recorded her vocals, right?
  • No need for comma after date.
Composition
  • For is not needed before three minutes.
  • Sample is too long. It should be around 22 seconds.
    • I don't know how to upload them though. Someone else did it for me. Till
Reception
  • "very now, very radio-friendly" --> radio friendly is fine.
  • than the group's previous two singles; "Get Sexy" and "About a Girl". --> colon
  • He elaborated, "There's something depressing about a pop song which wears the formula for great pop songs quite as transparently as this does." --> Colon, not comma. And period outside quotation marks.
  • Sweet 7 also became the first Sugababes album since Taller in More Ways (2005) to contain three top ten singles. --> Source for this information?
Promotion
  • Went and fixed these issues myself as well.
References
  • References should be in British English format (e.g. 1 January 2012).

Second lookthrough

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  • I will give a second lookthrough of the article once the reference dates are all formatted correctly.
    • Okay thanks. I will fix them later today, I had a 2000 word report to do yesterday. Till