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Reviewer: FunkMonk (talk · contribs) 22:09, 16 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Replaced. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:13, 17 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The whinchat is a sort-tailed bird" Short I assume?
Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:13, 17 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • "has blackish face mask" Missing a?
Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:13, 17 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Its main call is a hue-tac-tac" Maybe add "is described as a"?
Done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:13, 17 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • "to a maximum recorded of just over five years" Wild or captive?
Added. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:31, 17 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • With such a large range, I'd assume some subspecies are recognised or have been proposed?
Apparently not. Added. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:31, 17 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Seems the supercilium could be mentioned in the intro?
Added. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:13, 17 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The whinchat is a solitary species" Only the intro states this.
Added. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:13, 17 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Looks good, passed! FunkMonk (talk) 15:01, 17 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]
That was fast work, thanks indeed. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 17:01, 17 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]