Template:Did you know nominations/2017 British and Irish Lions tour to New Zealand

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:24, 22 July 2015 (UTC)

2017 British and Irish Lions tour to New Zealand

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... that the 2017 British and Irish Lions tour to New Zealand will see the British and Irish Lions seeking their first series win over New Zealand in 46 years?

ALT1:... that there have been complaints that the 2017 British and Irish Lions tour to New Zealand will be too concentrated in the North Island rather than touring the whole country?
Reviewed: Titoo

Created by PeeJay2K3 (talk), Rugby.change (talk), and The C of E (talk). Nominated by The C of E (talk) at 09:07, 13 July 2015 (UTC).

Newly non-redirect, long enough, neutral, verifiable, and no copyvios/paraphrasing issues detected. Hooks are cited and interesting. QPQ complete. I'm striking ALT 1, as it focuses on a criticism against the schedule/team. That criticism is worth mentioning in the article, but doesn't need to be on the main page. Besides, it's unlikely to be terribly interesting to those outside of New Zealand. Good to go! ~ Rob^Talk 03:35, 16 July 2015 (UTC)

Could the hook be less repetitive? Like:
ALT2: ... that in 2017 the British and Irish Lions will seek their first series win over New Zealand in 46 years?
Also, there are many paragraphs that don't have any citation at all, per Rule D2. Yoninah (talk) 21:54, 22 July 2015 (UTC)

@Yoninah: Not sure what you mean, all the paragraphs have cites. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 22:11, 22 July 2015 (UTC)

Oh, no, I was looking at the wrong article (British and Irish Lions). What do you think about the alt? Yoninah (talk) 22:16, 22 July 2015 (UTC)

@Yoninah: Yes, it's fine. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 22:18, 22 July 2015 (UTC)

Great. Restoring tick per Rob's review. Yoninah (talk) 22:22, 22 July 2015 (UTC)