Template:Did you know nominations/Amy Brown (dietitian)
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:24, 11 October 2019 (UTC)
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Amy Brown (dietitian)
- ... that Professor Amy Brown researches social barriers to breastfeeding, one of which is that British people believe that smacking children is more acceptable than breastfeeding in public? Source: [1][2]
Created by Nejaby (talk). Self-nominated at 16:43, 29 August 2019 (UTC).
the hook is not mentioned in the article. The hook needs to be rewritten. I've fixed the template for you. Also, make sure to read the rules of dyk at WP:DYKRULES. Pining @Nejaby:.___CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 09:47, 30 August 2019 (UTC)
Thanks for fixing the template Pining @CAPTAIN MEDUSA:. I have amended to include only text in the article. Will do a couple of reviews since this is my second DYK article. Nejaby (talk) 14:08, 2 September 2019 (UTC)
Full review needed by new reviewer; prior reviewer has not returned after over three weeks. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 03:31, 25 September 2019 (UTC)
- @Nejaby: I'm looking at this now. The article was new enough and long enough, and the hook is now included and cited in the article. Fewer than five DYK credits, so no QPQ necessary. I'd like to see an inline citation on the sentence that begins "She had been simultaneously working" before this gets promoted. I've made a couple of minor copyediting fixes as well. Raymie (t • c) 18:32, 27 September 2019 (UTC)
- @Raymie: The nominator hasn't edited in over a month so the citation issue will need to be resolved by another editor. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 23:50, 6 October 2019 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: I couldn't find any citation for her working at Swansea Metropolitan, so I had to remove the entire sentence. I was able to find a citation for her PhD in psychology, though. This should now be ready to approve. Raymie (t • c) 00:06, 7 October 2019 (UTC)
- @Raymie: Thanks for the edit. Can this be approved now? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:12, 10 October 2019 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: It might feel like double dipping, but given that the citation issue was the only thing I wanted fixed and the nominator isn't coming back, I'm going to
tick it. Raymie (t • c) 00:47, 10 October 2019 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: It might feel like double dipping, but given that the citation issue was the only thing I wanted fixed and the nominator isn't coming back, I'm going to
- @Raymie: Thanks for the edit. Can this be approved now? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:12, 10 October 2019 (UTC)
- @Narutolovehinata5: I couldn't find any citation for her working at Swansea Metropolitan, so I had to remove the entire sentence. I was able to find a citation for her PhD in psychology, though. This should now be ready to approve. Raymie (t • c) 00:06, 7 October 2019 (UTC)
- @Raymie: The nominator hasn't edited in over a month so the citation issue will need to be resolved by another editor. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 23:50, 6 October 2019 (UTC)
References
- ^ "Changing breastfeeding policies worldwide - Economic and Social Research Council". esrc.ukri.org. Retrieved 2019-08-29.
- ^ Dean, Sam (2016-09-09). "Britain has world's lowest breastfeeding rates because young mothers are pressured to 'get their lives back', expert says". The Telegraph. ISSN 0307-1235. Retrieved 2019-08-29.