Template:Did you know nominations/Andrew Dallmeyer

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 13:05, 5 March 2015 (UTC)

Andrew Dallmeyer

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... that Andrew Dallmeyer put on a one man show where he played Osama bin Laden as Santa Claus on 11 September 2002?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Carolina Neurath
Comment: Lots of good hooks in this article - please feel free to suggest any others!

2x expanded and sourced (BLP) by Staceydolxx (talk). Self nominated at 21:50, 1 March 2015 (UTC).

Sufficiently expanded (under the 5x rule, not the 2xBLP rule, actually), meets core content policies. Part of the hook is cited, but the part that it was a one man show or that Dallmeyer played in it is not. The article doesn't even say that it was a one-man show AFAICT. --Jakob (talk) 13:07, 2 March 2015 (UTC)

Well that's embarrassing! I've read so much about him for this article, I completely forgot what I had actually written! Its in there now Jakob. Sorry and thanks very much for reviewing this. Any suggestions for a improved catchy hook? ツStacey (talk) 19:57, 2 March 2015 (UTC)

I think the hook is quite good as it is! Sure to draw a lot of views. Good to go now. --Jakob (talk) 01:46, 5 March 2015 (UTC)