Template:Did you know nominations/Aniello Desiderio
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:15, 25 June 2015 (UTC)
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Aniello Desiderio
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that the Italian guitarist Aniello Desiderio (pictured), a child prodigy, formed a baroque-tango fusion group?
5x expanded by Dr. Blofeld (talk), Nvvchar (talk), and Rosiestep (talk). Nominated by Rosiestep (talk) at 16:17, 16 May 2015 (UTC).
@Rosiestep: To guitarists I think the John McLaughlin concerto one is more notable, can you change it to that in 2012, John McLaughlin selected Aniello Desiderio to perform at the European Premiere of his Concerto Thieves and Poets?♦ Dr. Blofeld 16:52, 16 May 2015 (UTC)
- Ok; I've struck the original hook. Here's ALT1: ... that in 2012, John McLaughlin selected Aniello Desiderio (pictured) to perform at the European Premiere of his Concerto Thieves and Poets? -Rosiestep (talk) 16:59, 16 May 2015 (UTC)
Full review needed. BlueMoonset (talk) 06:35, 14 June 2015 (UTC)
Age good, created May 14, nominated May 16. Length good. Hook cited. BLP is within policy. <non-DYK criteria>I'd do some copy editing for overliniking, replace list of 26 wikilinked countries with "26 countries on 3 continents", fix "2000-04", add {{Infobox musical artist}}. I *almost* called the list of honors and the first paragraph of the Early life section close paraphrasing, but I think the structure of the facts somewhat requires they be presented in this order. That said, I'd try harder to rephrase this kind of thing.</non-DYK criteria> --Dennis Bratland (talk) 18:14, 21 June 2015 (UTC)
@Dennis Bratland: Can you try to reword what you think is problematic and help us out here?♦ Dr. Blofeld 16:56, 22 June 2015 (UTC)
- There are no high-priority problems with the article, but if I have time I'll come back and try a little polishing. --Dennis Bratland (talk) 18:14, 22 June 2015 (UTC)