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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 16:43, 27 August 2024 (UTC)

Apache Christ

  • ... that the painter of Apache Christ prepared by stopping showering, and sprinkling himself with gold dust?
Created by Gobonobo (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 123 past nominations.

gobonobo + c 01:42, 6 August 2024 (UTC).

  • Article is new enough, and each hook is interesting. Reliably sourced. Please rephrase the main hook: ‘not showering’ rather than ‘stopping showering’ would suffice. Cheers, Will Thorpe (talk) 07:05, 9 August 2024 (UTC)
    • I’ll add further that the second hook is rather long and conveys the same as the first. Definitely better to amend the first hook and go with that, or the last hook. Will Thorpe (talk) 07:07, 9 August 2024 (UTC)
    • user0 Please note above regarding phrasing. Will Thorpe (talk) 11:11, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
      • ALT3: that in preparation for his creation of Apache Christ, Robert Lentz stopped showering and sprinkled himself with gold dust?
      • ALT4: that the painter of Apache Christ prepared by sprinkling himself with gold dust and not showering?