Template:Did you know nominations/Autumn Sandeen

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:24, 4 August 2014 (UTC)

Autumn Sandeen

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~~... that Autumn Sandeen was the first US service member to publicly succeed in petitioning the Pentagon to change her gender marker on all military documents?~~

Reviewed: Jerry Dorgan

Created by EvanRo (talk). Self nominated at 20:10, 17 July 2014 (UTC).

ALT1... that Autumn Sandeen was the first US service member to publicly have her gender identification changed on all her military records?

Note I changed marker to designation, as that certainly seems more natural offhand. (Marker sounds like something to do with DNA.) However, does marker have some special meaning I don't know? EEng (talk) 07:04, 19 July 2014 (UTC)

Your ALT1 hook looks great to me. Thanks for the help. --EvanRo (talk) 17:38, 23 July 2014 (UTC)

Full review needed. (Struck original hook since ALT1 seems to be preferred by nominator.) BlueMoonset (talk) 06:08, 30 July 2014 (UTC)

New enough, long enough, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. Hook ref verified and cited inline. QPQ done. I changed "gender designation" to "gender identification" per changes in the article. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 21:37, 3 August 2014 (UTC)