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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 12:29, 23 January 2015 (UTC)

Charles Mackarness

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St Martin's-on-the-Hill, Scarborough

  • Comment: If I had realised the significance, I would have had this article ready for the 100th anniversary of the raid.

Created by Bikeroo (talk). Self nominated at 16:23, 13 January 2015 (UTC).

  • . New article, long enough within policy. Good hook. FunkyCanute (talk) 18:33, 13 January 2015 (UTC)
  • The hook is too long. Excluding (pictured), which doesn't count, it's 223 characters. The limit is 200. The hook will have to be trimmed or replaced with a shorter one. Also the review doesn't specify what was done, such as a paraphrasing check. MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 21:15, 13 January 2015 (UTC)
  • Agreed, hook is too long. With regards to 'what was done', that should be covered by my comment: New article, long enough within policy. Admittedly, there is a comma missing after enough, which perhaps doesn't make clear that the article is new enough, long enough and adheres to policy.FunkyCanute (talk) 21:35, 13 January 2015 (UTC)