Template:Did you know nominations/Coming of Age in Karhide

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:19, 1 August 2016 (UTC)

Coming of Age in Karhide

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~~... that Ursula K. Le Guin's short story "Coming of Age in Karhide" discusses adolescence on a fictional planet where people are neither male nor female?~~

ALT1:~~... that "Coming of Age in Karhide" examines the challenges of reaching adulthood on a fictional planet where people are neither male nor female?~~
ALT2:... that Ursula K. Le Guin's short story "Coming of Age in Karhide" depicts socially acceptable sexual promiscuity?
Reviewed: Frédéric Gounongbe

Created by Vanamonde93 (talk). Self-nominated at 13:05, 23 July 2016 (UTC).

Approve ALT2. Passes New (but expanded 5x within last 7 days, not created new as indicated), Long enough, appears to be within policy; the hook format is good, but only ALT2 passes content; user passes QPQ, and there is no image. juju (hajime! | waza) 03:45, 24 July 2016 (UTC)

@Jujutsuan: thanks for the review. Just fyi, I moved it to the mainspace less than 24 hours ago; so it's actually "new" as well. Regards, Vanamonde (talk) 06:12, 24 July 2016 (UTC)

Woops, I stand corrected. Totally missed that line in the page history. juju (hajime! | waza) 06:21, 24 July 2016 (UTC)

@Jujutsuan: @Vanamonde93: "examines an example" is awkwardly alliterative. Yoninah (talk) 00:05, 29 July 2016 (UTC)

@Jujutsuan: @Yoninah: I've swapped "examines an example of" with "depicts." I don't think this alters the hook enough to necessitate re-review, but it might be good if one of you took a look. Vanamonde (talk) 04:34, 29 July 2016 (UTC)

Yes, that's fine. Hook ref verified and cited inline. Rest of review per ~~Vanamonde93~~Jujutsuan. ALT2 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 10:18, 29 July 2016 (UTC)

You mean per Jujutsuan, surely :) Vanamonde (talk) 10:22, 29 July 2016 (UTC)

Of course. I got confused by all the "name-calling" on this thread. Yoninah (talk) 14:00, 29 July 2016 (UTC)