Template:Did you know nominations/Dalen Hotel

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 10:09, 15 March 2013 (UTC).

Dalen Hotel

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~~... that Dalen Hotel (pictured) is among the best preserved wooden hotels from the 19th century?~~

Reviewed: NA

5x expanded by Strachkvas (talk). Nominated by Oceanh (talk) at 08:38, 6 March 2013 (UTC).

5X expansion good. Hook checks out even though source is in Norwegian (Google translate verified hook). Suggest alternate hook to include location of hotel:

ALT1: ... that Dalen Hotel (pictured) in Dalen, Telemark, Norway is among the best preserved wooden hotels from the 19th century?

--Mike Cline (talk) 13:38, 6 March 2013 (UTC)

Thank you for the review, and for providing an alternative hook! I checked your suggested alt hook with location, and corrected the link to "Dalen". If this hook is used, I also propose to de-link the country name (Norway), and possibly move (pictured) to appear directly after the bolded Dalen Hotel. Oceanh (talk) 14:49, 6 March 2013 (UTC)

Hate to be a wet blanket and all, but this article fails Supplementary guideline D2 Manxruler (talk) 15:47, 6 March 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for pointing at insufficient inline citations; I also notice that the expander of the article now has provided inline citations to every section. I listed a book about the hotel as a possible further source. Oceanh (talk) 09:53, 7 March 2013 (UTC)

Needs reviewer to confirm that article conforms to DYK rules and ALT hook is valid (new reviewer needed for ALT hook). BlueMoonset (talk) 03:04, 9 March 2013 (UTC)

AGF for foreign-language hook fact. Expansion was recent and plenty long enough. No close paraphrasing detected (looked at two sources). Suitably referenced. ALT1 is good to go. Schwede 66 04:55, 15 March 2013 (UTC)