Template:Did you know nominations/Daniel H. Coakley

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:03, 9 September 2017 (UTC)

Daniel H. Coakley

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• ... that Daniel H. Coakley was impeached after he secured a pardon for mobster Raymond L. S. Patriarca? source:"...He arranged a pardon for notorious mobster Raymond Patriarca – a move that finally led to Coakley being impeached from the Council."
  • ALT1:... that Daniel H. Coakley and James Michael Curley revealed John F. Fitzgerald's dalliance with a cigarette girl to his wife?

• Reviewed: C. Louise Boehringer

Created by Hirolovesswords (talk). Self-nominated at 00:25, 13 August 2017 (UTC).

• @Hirolovesswords: New, in time long enough, sourced, QPQ done, hooks largely check out with offline sources accepted as good faith. However, the article says he "conspired to extort large sums of money from Paramount," not that he did so, while the hook says he did so (note that ALT3 is in line with the article here, saying he was accused of extorting the money). How submitting a revised hook that deletes the reference to Paramount extortion, and includes that he was impeached after the pardon? --Usernameunique (talk) 00:20, 28 August 2017 (UTC)

• Hirolovesswords, just a friendly reminder about submitting a revised hook. Thanks, --Usernameunique (talk) 20:56, 5 September 2017 (UTC)

• Done Hirolovesswords (talk) 11:28, 6 September 2017 (UTC)

• Thanks Hirolovesswords. Both hooks check out. --Usernameunique (talk) 16:02, 6 September 2017 (UTC)