Template:Did you know nominations/El Eternauta: segunda parte
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The result was: promoted by Rjjiii talk 16:29, 11 September 2024 (UTC)
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El Eternauta: segunda parte
- ... that comic writer Héctor Germán Oesterheld was victim of an enforced disappearance while writing El Eternauta: segunda parte?
- Source: Alfredo Serra (July 22, 2019). "La trágica historia del hombre que creó El Eternauta: el más audaz e inolvidable de los cómics argentinos" [The tragic story of the man who created the Eternaut: the boldest and unforgettable Argentine comic] (in Spanish). Infobae. Retrieved August 9, 2024.
Moved to mainspace by Cambalachero (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 122 past nominations.
Cambalachero (talk) 17:49, 9 August 2024 (UTC).
- Will review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 03:46, 10 August 2024 (UTC)
- Better wording: ALT1 ... while writing El Eternauta: segunda parte, Héctor Germán Oesterheld was murdered by the Argentine junta? (or disappeared instead of murdered? (t · c) buidhe 00:01, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems |
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Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation |
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QPQ: Done. |
Overall: Article looks good. My only concern is the hook states that it was
while writing
the story, whereas the article says he was a victim of an enforced disappearance shortly after ending the story.
Thoughts on this? BeanieFan11 (talk) 00:12, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
- Done. The problem was that I started writing "on the fly", and by logic, if the story is completed (the comic itself is) he must have been kidnapped after finishing it. And yet, it happened a year earlier. I then corrected the article when I realized that and sought sources with more detail, but I forgot to update the lead. As for the proposed ALT1, that doesn't seem like better wording to me. "Murdered" (a public figure by a national government) would suggest something more visible and/or public, like a firing squad execution, and just "disappeared" sounds like a magic trick. A hook should be understood on its own, without any other context at all. "enforced disappearance" is more precise and does not leave space for misunderstandings. Cambalachero (talk) 04:30, 11 August 2024 (UTC)
BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:03, 16 August 2024 (UTC)