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The result was: promoted by — Crisco 1492 (talk) 04:57, 10 March 2013 (UTC).

Fox Harb'r Golf Resort & Spa

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... that in 2009, Tiger Woods set the course record at Nova Scotia's Fox Harb'r (entrance pictured)?

Reviewed: Vahram Papazyan (athlete)
Comment: I am unsure about the wording of the hook. I don't know if it should include the word "golf" or not. Open to suggestions

Created by Kelapstick (talk), LadyofShalott (talk). Nominated by Kelapstick (talk) at 21:16, 21 February 2013 (UTC).

ALT 1 ... that in 2009, Tiger Woods set the course record at Fox Harb'r (entrance pictured), which follows the coast of the Northumberland Strait? LadyofShalott 03:48, 22 February 2013 (UTC)

I think most people know what sport Tiger Woods plays so the extra wording 'golf' would be unnecessary. I do like the 2009 in golf link, and would suggest in 2009 instead. I like the original better than the alt because it's more concise and the added info is not that exciting or hooky. Just my opinion. delldot ∇. 17:49, 26 February 2013 (UTC)

Agree with the linking of 2009 in golf, I am happy with either the original or ALT with the revised linking. --kelapstick^(bainuu) 00:11, 27 February 2013 (UTC)

Reviewer needed now that hook has been set. BlueMoonset (talk) 04:23, 9 March 2013 (UTC)

All good, yeah? Go get em, Tiger! Cheers, ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 05:05, 9 March 2013 (UTC)