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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:12, 15 March 2018 (UTC)

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French cruiser Milan

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Milan, a late 19th Century unprotected cruiser of the French Navy
Milan, a late 19th Century unprotected cruiser of the French Navy
  • ... that upon her completion in 1885 the French cruiser Milan was considered the fastest warship afloat? Source:"This vessel has been under trial for more than a month at Brest, for speed tests, and is believed to be the fastest war vessel afloat" [1] [2] [3]
    • ALT1:... that Milan was the first steel cruiser of the French Navy? Source: "The first French steel cruiser was the 1,705 ton Milan, laid down in 1885" [4] Source: "The French Navy's first steel cruiser of any type, the 1,705 ton Milan" [5]

References

  1. ^ The Internal Revenue Record and Customs Journal. P.V. Van Wyck & Company. 1885.
  2. ^ The Engineer: With which is Incorporated Steam Engineering. 1885.
  3. ^ The Shipwrecked mariner.
  4. ^ Sondhaus, Lawrence (2001). Naval Warfare, 1815-1914. Psychology Press. ISBN 9780415214780.
  5. ^ Sondhaus, Lawrence (2004-05-04). Navies in Modern World History. Reaktion Books. ISBN 9781861892027.

Created by SamHolt6 (talk). Self-nominated at 07:04, 16 February 2018 (UTC).

  • Reviewer —Ed!(talk) 02:18, 21 February 2018 (UTC)

Article created Feb. 10, prose is of sufficient length, references seem to check out. Image is PD and not seeing any problems there. Not seeing any problems with this one. —Ed!(talk) 02:20, 21 February 2018 (UTC)

  • The prose content is only 1055 characters. The minimum is 1500 characters, not including subheads, infobox, categories, references, lists, and tables. Yoninah (talk) 23:14, 7 March 2018 (UTC)
  • @Yoninah: is it acceptable in this instance for me to add more to the prose? I imagine I could find some but haven't got a lot of experience with this kind of objection at DYK. —Ed!(talk) 01:37, 13 March 2018 (UTC)
  • @Ed!: yes, certainly. The icon is just an indication that the nomination is unsatisfactory. Anyone can improve the article so it meets the criteria and claim co-creation credit. Then another reviewer will finish up the nomination. Yoninah (talk) 09:50, 13 March 2018 (UTC)
  • @Yoninah: OK, take a look now, it has been expanded. —Ed!(talk) 23:32, 13 March 2018 (UTC)
  • Thank you. Here is a full review: New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen in online sources. The first hook is the best IMO; hook ref verified and cited inline. Images in article are freely licensed. No QPQ needed for nominator with less than 5 DYK credits. I'm adding Ed! to the DYK co-creation credits. ALT0 good to go, though I think the image is too fuzzy for the image slot. Yoninah (talk) 12:10, 14 March 2018 (UTC)
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