Template:Did you know nominations/James Francis Dwyer

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The result was: promoted by Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 00:46, 27 May 2018 (UTC)

James Francis Dwyer

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... that before becoming a successful writer, James Francis Dwyer was sentenced to seven years in prison for forgery and uttering? Source: [1]

Reviewed: Let's Move Nashville

5x expanded by Freikorp (talk). Self-nominated at 07:50, 14 May 2018 (UTC).

: Interesting. 5x checks out at time of nomination. QPQ is good. Sourced. Eddie891 ^Talk _Work 16:26, 26 May 2018 (UTC)

@Freikorp: Hello, I came by to promote this, but either the article or the hook needs to be rephrased since the word "uttering" is not explicitly mentioned in the article (for that matter, neither is forgery, although it can be inferred from the article text so that's given a pass). Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 23:43, 26 May 2018 (UTC)

Hi Narutolovehinata5. Thanks for picking that up. I've since added both forgery and uttering to the body. They were both there when I nominated this for DYK but somehow got removed as I continued to expand the article. Freikorp (talk) 00:11, 27 May 2018 (UTC)

Thanks. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 00:46, 27 May 2018 (UTC)