Template:Did you know nominations/Jasuben Shilpi
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The result was: promoted by Froggerlaura ribbit 03:23, 28 January 2013 (UTC)
Jasuben Shilpi
[edit]- ... that Jasuben Shilpi, the Indian sculpture artist was known as "The Bronze woman of India"?
Created/expanded by Titodutta (talk). Self nom at 03:05, 21 January 2013 (UTC)
- Article was created on 21 Jan.
- Prose has 1795 characters when this was written.
- No PoV concerns.
- Plagiarism might be a concern (see [1] & [2]). But it's just a couple of minutes work to rephrase all that and I'll leave that to Tittodutta.
- Hook is interesting and is cited in the article. Suraj T 14:24, 21 January 2013 (UTC)
- Plagiarism? Those are mainly proper nouns! Names of states.. maharashtra karnataka kerala tamil nadu bihar uttaranchal and rajasthan.. "Bronze woman of India" a title, "gandhi and martin luther king jr" proper nouns etc! --Tito Dutta (talk) 14:43, 21 January 2013 (UTC)
- Shouldn't have used that P-word. :p " installed in florida university jacksonville chicago and city of charlotte north carolina" are not a string of proper nouns. It's bordering on close paraphrasing. I was tempted to pass it, but I assumed you would correct it, instead of using the time (and number of keystrokes) it would have taken to correct that, by replying here instead. Suraj T 14:55, 21 January 2013 (UTC)
- Those two words "installed in" is not close paraphrasing! Anyway, I have replaced the word "installed" with "situated" but "install" sound better for "statues", I think! Remaining part of the sentence mentions the places, I have reordered few proper nouns too! --Tito Dutta (talk) 15:28, 21 January 2013 (UTC)
- Shouldn't have used that P-word. :p " installed in florida university jacksonville chicago and city of charlotte north carolina" are not a string of proper nouns. It's bordering on close paraphrasing. I was tempted to pass it, but I assumed you would correct it, instead of using the time (and number of keystrokes) it would have taken to correct that, by replying here instead. Suraj T 14:55, 21 January 2013 (UTC)
- Plagiarism? Those are mainly proper nouns! Names of states.. maharashtra karnataka kerala tamil nadu bihar uttaranchal and rajasthan.. "Bronze woman of India" a title, "gandhi and martin luther king jr" proper nouns etc! --Tito Dutta (talk) 14:43, 21 January 2013 (UTC)
Good to go. And sorry for the plagiarism accusation. I meant "please rephrase those sentences". And thanks for correcting it. :) Suraj T 15:48, 21 January 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. --Tito Dutta (talk) 15:55, 21 January 2013 (UTC)