Template:Did you know nominations/John C. B. Pendleton

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 04:31, 16 December 2012 (UTC)

John C. B. Pendleton, Henry Van Hoevenberg, Alfred Ellet Hitchner, and Arthur P. Robinson

( Back to T:TDYK )

( Article history links:

)

... that the earliest head coaches of the Rutgers Scarlet Knights football team include John C. B. Pendleton (pictured), Henry Van Hoevenberg, Alfred Ellet Hitchner and Arthur P. Robinson, all four combining for a record of 12–33?

Reviewed: John Y. T. Smith, Paleontology in Wisconsin, Paleontology in West Virginia, Paleontology in Washington

Created/expanded by Cbl62 (talk), Jweiss11 (talk). Nominated by Cbl62 (talk) at 06:41, 28 November 2012 (UTC)

This is not a full review, just a quick one. The hook is too long (more than 200 characters), this should be under 200 characters per Wikipedia:Did you know#hookformat. Zia Khan 13:03, 28 November 2012 (UTC)

This is a four-part multiple hook. Those aren't strictly limited to 200. At 230 for four, I thought this was somewhat concise. Cbl62 (talk) 15:29, 28 November 2012 (UTC)

The hook length is fine, per WP:DYKSG#C3. Even without applying that rule, DYKcheck reports it as 216 characters, because the ellipsis and (pictured) aren't counted. MANdARAX • XAЯAbИAM 00:52, 29 November 2012 (UTC)

I'll try to get the QPQs done in the next couple days. Thanks. Cbl62 (talk) 03:08, 29 November 2012 (UTC)

QPQ information has now been added. Cbl62 (talk) 02:09, 2 December 2012 (UTC)

These four articles were all started around November 26th and are long enough. The image is in the public domain. The hook statement has a suitable reference for each coach and adding them up, I agree with Cbl62's total. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:24, 15 December 2012 (UTC)