Template:Did you know nominations/List of tallest buildings in Brooklyn

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The result was: promoted by ~ Rob^Talk 04:31, 7 August 2015 (UTC)

List of tallest buildings in Brooklyn

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Williamsburgh Savings Bank Tower

~~... that the Williamsburgh Savings Bank Tower (pictured) was the tallest high-rise building in Brooklyn for 85 years, until The Brooklyner was topped out in 2009?~~

Reviewed: Widerstehe doch der Sünde, BWV 54

Moved to mainspace by West Virginian (talk). Self-nominated at 01:03, 13 July 2015 (UTC).

Move from mainspace within the time window, readable prose more than double minimum requirement, referencing is excellent, text avoids close paraphrasing, and tone is neutral. Hook is interesting, factual, and properly directly cited in the text. QPQ completed. Note: image is licensed under the Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 3.0 Unported license. - Dravecky (talk) 18:36, 16 July 2015 (UTC)

I don't understand the math. If it was constructed in 1929 and overtaken in 2009, that would be 80 years. Footnote 3 also doesn't give the construction date, though this is the source used for that date in 2 places. Perhaps you want to cite Footnote 28 for the date instead? Yoninah (talk) 21:57, 20 July 2015 (UTC)

Yoninah, thank you tremendously for the catch. I've amended the lede with the correct math, and added the additional inline citation to support the claim. -- West Virginian (talk) 22:18, 20 July 2015 (UTC)

ALT1: ... that the Williamsburgh Savings Bank Tower (pictured) was the tallest high-rise building in Brooklyn for 80 years, until The Brooklyner was topped out in 2009? -- West Virginian (talk) 22:18, 20 July 2015 (UTC)

That looks better, thanks. ALT1 hook refs verified and cited inline. Rest of review per @Dravecky:. Yoninah (talk) 22:22, 20 July 2015 (UTC)